Challenged

Odd that a person
could stumble full circle
back to a door
they hadn’t seen
first time around

The passage narrowed now
but still wide enough
to give us room
to choose

Ever babes, we wobble
Each bruise a learning thing
until suddenly we discover
instead of crawling
we walk on steady feet
with purpose sure.

 

The Peaceful Pub Poetry Blog has added The Challenge Forum.  This poem was written in response to the first challenge offered there.  Hope you will check it out and take part.

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